IELTS 만점 writing sample 입니다.

Posted 2016. 1. 14. 15:48 by 분당IELTS그룹과외

 

만점 라이팅은 배끼는것이 아니라 패턴과 어떠한 단어를 사용했는지 서론 본론 결론은 어떻게 했는지를 보셔야해요.

 

라이팅은 어려운 단어보다도 적합한 단어가 우선 순위입니다.

 

 

 

 

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주제별 문제별 브레인스토밍 자료

Posted 2011. 2. 4. 16:16 by 분당IELTS그룹과외

브레인스토밍은 시간 단축 및 더욱 좋은 글을 쓸수 있게해줍니다.

많은 주제들을 하루에 한두개라도 브레인 스토밍을 하는 것은 매우 중요 합니다.

이자료는 많은 주제들을 영어로 브레인 스토밍 해놓은 것입니다.

아이디어도 배우시고 공부하시는데 도움이 되기를 바랍니다.^-^/



PS 두개 모두 같은 자료이며 저장 파일 종류만 다른겁니다^-^ 






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    감사합니다!

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    자료 감사드립니다.

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IELTS 만점 writing sample 입니다.

Posted 2010. 12. 4. 11:00 by 분당IELTS그룹과외


만점 에세이 공부 방법은 외우는것이아니라 어떤형식으로 어쩡 패턴으로 서술했는지를

보시고 단어사용등을 체크하시면 많은 도움이됩니다.




Some conclude that college students should bear total expenses for their higher education on the generalization that college graduates usually receive higher salaries for similar jobs than those without a college degree. We can not deny the fact that higher level of education, indeed, do associate with better income. Still, build on such fact alone, the conclusion remains questionable when more aspects are taken into consideration.

 

The whole argument in question rests on an assumption that it is always the case that people with higher education make more money than those less well-educated. But salary or income is, in most cases, based on contributions made by employees to companies or organizations in which they are employed. Statistics in the labor market indicate that people with professional training tend to find jobs easier than college graduates do and that blue-collar workers who do not hold college degrees are becoming the hotties in the labor market. Employers prefer to hire and pay more to highly skilled and specially trained people rather than fresh college graduates. In the auto industry, for instance, skilled technicians make two or three times more than their college educated counterparts who make the average salaries in other companies. And it is widely accepted that people's income is determined more by talent, hard work, and willingness to take risks than solely by certain qualifications such as college education. Otherwise, the unemployment rate of college graduates would not be increasing every year and the rule of supply and demand will lose much of power in controlling the labor market. Admittedly in some knowledge extensive field such as research, teaching, and practice of law the labor force are primarily consists of highly educated professionals. But such people make up only a fraction of the labor market and are thus unrepresentative of the whole employment in general.

 

Considering the goal of education, we find that it is even more problematic for the country to throw all the responsibility of financing college education to college students. The goal of higher education of a nation is to improve and strengthen the general level of intellectual and professional capacity of its labor force, thereby increasing the competency of the nation in the global economy. As tax payers, parents all contributes to the education system and country in various ways. It is only reasonable and necessary that the country gives some forms of financially assistance to students to ease the burden of rising education costs. Such help should go to not only students from needy or impoverished families but also outstanding students from affluent backgrounds. Doing so can significantly boost the motivation of children from millions of families to engage in higher level of study. It is understandable that the general quality of people in a country will improve and its economy will benefit both now and in years to follow.

If the burden of supporting children's higher education is dumped on parents and students, thousands of brilliant students will be deprived of chances to pursue their academic inspiration. Among those who suffer would definitely be future great scientists, business managers, artists and statesmen. The loss will be disastrous and irreversible.

 

In conclusion, the idea that students should also pay the full cost of their study is wrong and harmful because it is wrong to assume that higher education necessarily equalize high income. Moreover, it is in the best interest of a nation to take responsibility in financing college education so that the goal of higher education will be better met.

 

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ITLES Academic Task1 기출문제 및 모범답

Posted 2010. 7. 29. 10:45 by 분당IELTS그룹과외

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
 

 

 

model answer:

This diagram provides an overview of a domestic central heating system. It shows how the tank, boiler and pipes ensure a constant flow of hot waterto both the radiators and the taps.

The cold water enters the house and is stored in a water storage tank in the roof. From there ü flows down to the boiler, located on the ground floor of the house.

The boiler, which is fuelled by gas or oil, heats up the water as it passes through it. The hot water is then pumped round the house through a system of pipes and flows into the radiators, located in different rooms. The water circulates through the radiators, which have small tubes inside them to help distribute the heat, and this warms each of the rooms. Some of the water is directed to the taps to provide hot water for the house.

Once the water has been through the pipes and radiators, it is returned to the boiler to be re-heated and circulated round the house again.

Introduction: First sentence. Overview: Second sentence.

Key features: Entry of cold water into boiler; circulation of hot waterto radiators and taps; return of waterto boiler.

Supporting information: direction of flow; types of boiler; location of radiators; radiator tubes

Paragraph breaks: The paragraph breaks mark stages in the process.

Linkers: and, from there, then, once, again Reference words: it, both, there, which, this

Topic vocabulary: enters, stored, roof, flows, ground floor, located, passes, pumped, system, circulates, heat, directed, returned, re-heated

Less common vocabulary: ensure, fuelled by, heats up, distribute the heat, warms

Structures: An appropriate mix of active and passive structures and a range of sentence types are used.

 

Length: 172 words

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IELTS General Task1(Letter) band 8

Posted 2010. 6. 12. 16:53 by 분당IELTS그룹과외



IELTS 제네럴 모듈 Task1에서 8.0 받은 에세이 두개입니다.


정확한 표현과 어울리는 단어 선택과 논리네요.

그렇다고 어려운 표현은 아닙니다.


편지는 편지형식을 확실히 숙지하고 쓴다면 점수 높이는 좋은 방법 중 하나입니다.


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IELTS Writing task2 band 8.0 모음

Posted 2010. 6. 12. 04:14 by 분당IELTS그룹과외




Writing band 8 이상받은 샘플 4개입니다.

8.0이라고 그다지 어렵게 쓰여진게 아니란 것을 아실 수 있을 겁니다.

중요한건 문맥 흐름, 논리, 적절한 단어 사용~

잊지마세요~




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IELTS Writing 18 주제 대비 브레인 스토밍

Posted 2010. 6. 11. 21:00 by 분당IELTS그룹과외



Writing 주제별 한국어로 된 브레인 스토밍입니다


작문대비 18가지 주제에 관한 브레인 스토밍 입니다.

브레인스토밍은 평소에 연습을 해두어 시험때 시간을 잡아먹지 안도록 해야합니다.








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IELTS Writing 주제 별 브레인스토밍

Posted 2010. 6. 11. 20:56 by 분당IELTS그룹과외



Writing에는 브레인스토밍이 매우 중요합니다.

어떤문제가 나와도 대처 할 수있도록 항상 브레인스토밍 연습을 해야야지

시험시 시간 단축 및 좋은 글을 쓸 수 있습니다.

각 주제에대한 간략한 이유 브레인스토밍 영어 자료입니다.












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IELTS Writing 환영받는 배경문 및 작성법

Posted 2010. 6. 11. 20:53 by 분당IELTS그룹과외




Writing 서론에 배경등으로 글을 시작할때 유용한 문장들 모음입니다.


각 상황에 맞는 배경문과 배경문 만드는 법의 정리입니다.

논리적인 글 흐름도 writing 채점 항목 중 하나이고 글이 얼마나 멋있는지도 보니

벼경문을 잘 활용하면 점수가 올라갑니다~








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IELTS writing task2 핵심 주제 28가지

Posted 2010. 6. 11. 20:10 by 분당IELTS그룹과외

이 주제들은 반복적으로 출제되는 핵심적인 라이팅 주제로서,

스스로 한번 씩 연습해 보면 좋을 것 같습니다

 

IELTS WRITING 1.

many people believe that the main aim for university education is to help graduates to find better jobs, while some people believe that university education has wider benefits for individuals and society . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS WRITING 2.

It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

IELTS WRITING 3.  

Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and how do you think about it?

 

IELTS WRITING 4.

Higher education can be funded by several ways such as the following:1. All costs paid by the government; 2. All costs paid by the students;3. All costs paid by the government loan which students have to pay back after graduation.Please discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of all these three theories above and decide which the best is.

  

IELTS WRITING 5.

Schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through Internet, and they can study just as well at home. What extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS WRITING 6.

Some people think teachers have a greater influnce than parents in the development of a child’s intelligence and social skills. Do you agree or disagree? 2008-9-6

  

IELTS WRITING 7.

Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?c5-t2

 

IELTS WRITING 8.

In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individuual and the society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.

 

IELTS WRITING 9.

it is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be. What are the possible reasons for this and what can be done to reverse the trend?

  

IELTS WRITING 10.

It is now possible to perform everyday tasks, such as bank transaction, shopping or even office works, without meeting people face to face. What are the effects it may have on individuals and the society as a whole?

  

IELTS WRITING 11.

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  

IELTS WRITING 12.

Many people believe that the increasing use of modern technology at work and in leisure is reducing people’s creativity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

IELTS WRITING 13.

Food can be produced cheaper if we use improved fertilizers and better machinery. However some of methods may be dangerous for human health, and have negative effects for local communities. What is your opinion?

  

IELTS WRITING 14.

Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world's fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  

IELTS WRITING 15.

Unlimited car use has brought us a lot of problems. What are these problems? And should we discourage people to use cars?

  

IELTS WRITING 16.

15 Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS WRITING 17.

Some people say that giving aid to poor countries has more negative effects than positive effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS WRITING 18.

In many countries,the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend make positive or negative effects to society?

IELTS WRITING 19.

Some people think it is acceptable to use the animals in any way for benfits of human beings, while others think it is not justifiable. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

IELTS WRITING 20.

Throughout the history, male leaders often made the society more violent and conflicting. If women governed the world, it would be a more peaceful world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS WRITING 21.

Do the problems brought by international travel outweigh the advantages?

IELTS WRITING 22.

Several languages are dying out every year. Some people do not think it is important and say that our life will be simpler with fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

  

IELTS WRITING 23.

In some countries, advertisers increase the amount of advertising which try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys,and other goods. Parents object to such pressure on children. But some advertisers claim that there is useful information in these advertisements. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

IELTS WRITING 24.

The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in the society. Do you agree or disagree?

IELTS WRITING 25.

Sending criminals to the prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them.

  

IELTS WRITING 26.

Some people say that governments should pay for the public health care and education, while others say that it is not the government’s responsibility. Please discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  

IELTS WRITING 27.

Some people believe that individuals can not improve environment, but only governments and big companies can make a difference. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

  

IELTS WRITING 28.

Some people believe that the personal happiness is directly related with the economic success. Others argue that the happiness depends on completely other factors. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.

 


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